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Ans for:question 3

2009-07-09T04:58:00.000-07:00

I find the sample is interesting because the desciptive of the person use is very good as well as funny like:I looked from the corners of my eyes and saw those boys standing beside me emotionlessly, looking as cool as cucumbers!!! By using object or things to decribe a person can actually give us a better mental image of what the writer is telling us about and also uses pronouns like "I," "me," and "mine" for the interesting personal recount. Not only this, the phrase that describe a person are also written very well like "my mood turned dark and despondent." Overall, i find this story is written very well!... :)

Ans for:question 2

2009-07-09T03:13:00.000-07:00

Describe the time when you were lining up with several other students and waiting for your turn to be caned by the Principal.

I stood rooted to the ground outside the principal’s office. My heart was racing, my palms were sweaty and my head was spinning. I looked from the corners of my eyes and saw those boys standing beside me emotionlessly, looking as cool as cucumbers. The teachers who walked past us in the staff room glared at us with extremely displeased looks. I tried to calm my heart down and remain cool like the others, but I was trembling, on the brink of hysteria.

“How could I convince the principal that I was innocent? Would he and the discipline master listen to my explanation? Would they believe that it was not me who initiated the fight?” I thought. Thousands of questions raced through my feverish mind. I guess they might have faced numerous similar scenarios before and I doubted that they would believe me. A combination of helplessness and fear caused my bones to rattle.

“If only I had not punched Shawn in the face in anger.” I regretted. I wished that I had controlled my own temper at that time. I started recalling the incident.

I had entered my friend’s class to return his chemistry textbook. He was not in class at that time. My worst fears were confirmed when I saw the three infamous guys - Shawn, Vincent and Ivan, sitting at the back of the classroom.

To avoid causing trouble, I turned around and was about to step out of the classroom when a deep menacing voice barked. “Pretty boy, are you afraid of us? You are such a coward.”

An evil grin flashed across Vincent’s face.

“What’s your problem?” I stuttered.

He grabbed me by my collar and snapped, “Of course it matters to use when a disgusting boy like you come into our class”

Seething with anger, I shoved his hand away. Ivan darted over and pounded my chest. I could feel anger coursing through my veins and my temples throbbing with pain. I punched him in the face uncontrollably. Out of nowhere, the discipline master appeared and we knew that we were in great trouble.

My mood turned dark and despondent. “Why must they insult and bully me when I didn’t provoke them? Am I that despicable?” I muttered. Shawn must have heard me as he stared defiantly at me and nodded his head. I felt totally weak and insecure at heart. Disconsolate tears welled up in my eyes. I felt numb and immune to everything.

“Go in now!” the discipline master yelled.

Upon entering in the principal’s office, there were several canes with different thickness placed on his table. Those tough boys began to lock and unlock their fingers nervously with anxiety etched on their faces. Surprisingly, the sight of the canes did not overwhelm me. The first to be caned was Shawn. He bent his body over the table as he was told to do so. The principal held the cane with two hands above his head. Releasing his left hand, he swung the cane towards his buttocks. Shaun’s scream rose skywards in a dreadful and ear-piercing manner. Vincent and Ivan were holding their hands so tightly that their knuckles were white. I remained at ease and let out a snort of laughter when I saw a teardrop streaking down Shawn’s face.

It was my turn and I finally regained from my numbness. As I bent over the table, I got a little jittery as though something with tentacles were shifting somewhere in the depths of my stomach.

The first stroke of the cane landed on my buttocks. The office was deafeningly silent. Those three boys stared at me in disbelief.

Ans fo: question 1

2009-07-09T03:10:00.000-07:00

~~The 3 feature are:often using pronouns like "I," "me," and "mine.",truth and experience and choose to reveal details from your life or the life of someone you know or care about.

Home study task for english-about How to Write a Personal Recount/ Narrative

2009-07-09T03:08:00.000-07:00

1) Write down 3 features of a personal recount based on the given notes (30mins).
2) Do a Google search and find, read and copy/paste a sample of an interesting personal recount (between 300-800 words) (30mins)
3) Explain briefly why you found the sample interesting (100-200 words) (30mins)
4) Write a personal recount based on the following topic: The Best Thing I Have Ever Done (1 hr)
5) Read through the folloing list of Transition Words. As far as possible, improve and edit your writing by incorporating some of these words in your essay. These new words/phrases are to be highlighted/ underlined in your final work. (30min)

MySpace Music Player/Playlist (Flash MP3 Players) and Widgets - MyFlashFetish.com

2009-06-01T02:21:00.001-07:00

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2009-05-31T18:59:00.000-07:00

Poor little Russell!!! :(

Clean studying table!!! :)

Park... :)

!!!Our new home!!! :)

2009-05-31T18:25:00.000-07:00

"Hi! children, we are moving to a new big house. Now you do not need to fight for space and privacy,"my father announced happily. Father said that the new house would going to be very near my school.

Moving from the old place to new place was a very happy feeling but it made me sad too. When my mother said that i could not bring my loving pet dog, Russell, along i sobbed uncontrollably. I had no choice but to give it to my neighbour reluctantly. My parents ferried all the household furniture and other miscellaneous items.

When we reached our new house, i cordoned off my own area and i intended to furnish my room with photographs and stickers of "Duel Masters" on my study table. The H.D.B was a five room unit. It was very spacious and pristine. The shopping centre was a stone's throw away from my house. It was very good as we could shop conveniently. Infront of my room was a park. The fresh air invigorated me and made me refresh to study.

Moving into a new environment offer ample of opportunities for me to communicate with my parents. Every weekend, we went jogging and cycling at the park. We became a cohesive family unit. We hoped we could live here forever... :)

RE:English ca6 project!!!

2009-05-31T18:21:00.001-07:00

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